I think it looks really lovely.If the sleeper area wasn't there you still have to walk round there somehow to reach the dining area. Perhaps an opening door should have been considered on that side. As it is the design gives you an attractive walk way..It may however make more sense practically to have the dining area and maybe two sun loungers or similar in front of the sliding doors which ever design you go for.
The Conifers near the white french doors are really wide and nicked a lot of the garden so unsure wether my first idea will work
I think your first design has more interest.
We are leaning towards this design atm with the thought of adding pathways up the grass to other features maybe next summer when we have more time on our hands as we are slowly working our way round the house and renovating inside